My opinion
I think you need to create a supersaw sound. You reviewed my ~ Forever Young/Midnight Rave 2 ~ song. Notice the sound I used for the the main melody was a "supersaw". I created it using the 3xOsc. It sounds like if you replaced the synth that comes in at 0:48 with a supersaw, it would improve the sound. Also, The "kick" you are using sounds more like a low bongo drum. I suggest using The default kick, with some EQ'ing to raise the bass.
One last thing, the higher bongo that comes in on every first beat when the kick starts turned me off of the grove you had going. Perhaps if you got rid of it and replaced every note right after a kick with a bass synth, it would keep the groove going smooth :D (syncopation is key!)
I really like how it begins, you did an amazing job blending those sounds in the beginning! Up until 0:48 I have no complaints whatsoever! Very nice.
Overall you sound actually quite similar in many regards as I did during my first year of FL studio or so. Keep up the good work, and don't give up on it! Your skills will improve with experimentation so don't stop! :D
~ Catstuffer