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My opinion

I think you need to create a supersaw sound. You reviewed my ~ Forever Young/Midnight Rave 2 ~ song. Notice the sound I used for the the main melody was a "supersaw". I created it using the 3xOsc. It sounds like if you replaced the synth that comes in at 0:48 with a supersaw, it would improve the sound. Also, The "kick" you are using sounds more like a low bongo drum. I suggest using The default kick, with some EQ'ing to raise the bass.

One last thing, the higher bongo that comes in on every first beat when the kick starts turned me off of the grove you had going. Perhaps if you got rid of it and replaced every note right after a kick with a bass synth, it would keep the groove going smooth :D (syncopation is key!)

I really like how it begins, you did an amazing job blending those sounds in the beginning! Up until 0:48 I have no complaints whatsoever! Very nice.

Overall you sound actually quite similar in many regards as I did during my first year of FL studio or so. Keep up the good work, and don't give up on it! Your skills will improve with experimentation so don't stop! :D

~ Catstuffer

Its a shame,

That you don't have a real drummer to play :(

I think this is well put together. I didn't even realise you have so many genres of music on newgrounds here. All this needs is a solo, and about twice the length! lol. You should go back to this and extend it. 5/5 9/10

Jnr1114 responds:

Yeah. I like all music. I'll finish this soon. After my cousin gets over so we can finish it up. The solo comes right after then end of this demo. We have it all planned out :)
I would like a real drummer but. . .

Anyways, thanks for voting and rating!

-JNR

dude!

you reviewed a couple of my songs, so I thought i'd see whats on your page. This song is epic! I only wish the orchestra part was louder. But did you really put all this together?? That's awesome!!

agree with midnighttoday

The compression is a major draw back. Also, did you piece this together from copy written sources? Cause NG doesn't like that... Could potentially sound great, just needs a compression fix.

number 1!!

ITS GOT UNDER 9000 LISTENS!!!! Why??

lovely!

Very nice! Made my :/ face turn into a :) face! ^-^

Pretty sweet!

Awesome, but unforunately I have to agree with Linak37... the kick sounds uber preset... , other than that, really sweet!

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