alright well heres what I think
it could use some remodling. I think you need to approach this song with a harder more trance life feel. It seems pretty dnb at 0:53 when those drums come in. And the intro i think should have less, or a different type of reverb. It's not bad, but it does seem sorta disorganized. I think you should try again, put some more effort into making it sound more like the original. I feel you have done better in the past.